Breaking barriers through english

Your essays are probably the most important part of your business school application. After reading your essays, . This means that you must go beyond listing your accomplishments and describe your motivations, your interests, and even your weaknesses and fears. And you need to do it with language that truly represents how you communicate.
The thesis statement is in bold, the topic sentences are in italics, and each main point is underlined. When you write your own essay, of course, you will not need to mark these parts of the essay unless your teacher has asked you to do so. They are marked here just so that you can more easily identify them.